Initial feedback

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Upon the initial screening I was given feedback on what improvements I needed to make. They consisted of things like "Improve camera steadiness" , "Sound needs to be louder", "Make it more clear that it is a thriller", "change the lighting in certain places to make more of a creepy atmosphere and "certain shots need to be longer." Upon hearing about these improvements I took the steps  necessary to fix the ones that I could. I lengthened the some of the shots and made the sound louder along with mildly changing some of the lighting.